tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1152569870621658721.post8113506856789975043..comments2008-05-25T09:33:27.863-07:00Erichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02688305331874158041noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1152569870621658721.post-82806580578325462922008-05-25T09:33:00.000-07:002008-05-25T09:33:00.000-07:00I noticed in your Stevens/Williams piece, a hint of Hopkins in the first stanza? Untwisting last strands?<BR/>Perhaps it is because I am not a fan of Frost, but you have achieved your goal of making something better...where Frost (for me) ends at evoking an image, you evoke feelings of pity and futility powerfully. It strikes me that the speaker, although committing a (perhaps unnecessary)act of destruction, he invites a spectator to it - maybe an accomplice?juliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17370085075123307557noreply@blogger.com